breathe, i sighed
and exhaling fitful
cry while pensive lines
define impermanent pleading me
breathe, i sighed
breathe and wholly be
becoming more than seems
more than she may gleaning need
breathe, i sighed
and thus inspired strive
with such timid quiet words
to ever deserve most hopeful she
It was a little more dificult for me but I got it, just the last sentence is not clear for me, but I love it THANKS!
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My pleasure, Rebeca. I am so pleased that you continue to read my writing and find something in my verses that you enjoy.
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I love that last stanza particularly, and quite relate to that feeling… lovely to read, and inspiring. :))
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Thank you so much, Lia.
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